“How can I improve my story?”

Developmental Edits focus on big picture ideas such as:

• Setting and worldbuilding
• Plot
• Dialogue
• POV, voice, and tone
• Structure, flow, and pacing
• Characters and their development
• Clarity

What’s included if you book with me?

• An estimated ten to twenty paged (this may vary) editorial letter of your manuscript’s strengths and weaknesses.
• Comments throughout the manuscript–highlighting strengths, weaknesses, likes, suggestions for improvement, and the occasional: ‘oh. OH.’ ‘What do you MEAN HE JUST DIES??’ ‘They’re the reason why everything is so broken????’ and more.
• Document with chapter by chapter synopses
  • short summary of each chapter
  • short explanation of strengths and weaknesses
• Weekly updates, along with back and forth consultations
• Does not include line edits or other edits

Pricing: $0.008 USD per word | Requires a 30% deposit

Timeline: 6 to 8 weeks, depending on the length of the manuscript.

If you’d like a free sample edit to see if we’d be a good fit, fill out the form here on my website.