“I’m looking to see how I can improve my story.”
This focuses on :
- Setting and worldbuilding
- Plot
- Dialogue
- POV, voice, and tone
- Structure, flow, and pacing
- Characters
- Clarity
What’s included?
- An estimated three to six paged (this may vary) editorial letter of the strengths and weaknesses in every crucial part of the story.
- Comments throughout the manuscript–highlighting strengths, weaknesses, likes, and the occasional: ‘oh. OH.’ ‘What do you MEAN HE JUST DIES??’ ‘They’re the reason why everything is so broken????’ and more.
- Document with chapter by chapter synopses
- short summary of each chapter
- short explanation of strengths and weaknesses
- Weekly updates
- Does not include line edits or other edits
Pricing: $700.00 USD Flat Rate before July 1st | On and after July 1st, 2026: $0.008 USD per word | Requires a 15% deposit
Timeline: 6 to 8 weeks, depending on the length of the manuscript.

