Developmental Edits

“I’m looking to see how I can improve my story.”

This focuses on :

  • Setting and worldbuilding
  • Plot
  • Dialogue
  • POV, voice, and tone
  • Structure, flow, and pacing
  • Characters
  • Clarity

What’s included?

  • An estimated three to six paged (this may vary) editorial letter of the strengths and weaknesses in every crucial part of the story.
  • Comments throughout the manuscript–highlighting strengths, weaknesses, likes, and the occasional: ‘oh. OH.’ ‘What do you MEAN HE JUST DIES??’ ‘They’re the reason why everything is so broken????’ and more.
  • Document with chapter by chapter synopses
    • short summary of each chapter
    • short explanation of strengths and weaknesses
  • Weekly updates
  • Does not include line edits or other edits

Pricing: $700.00 USD Flat Rate before July 1st | On and after July 1st, 2026: $0.008 USD per word | Requires a 15% deposit

Timeline: 6 to 8 weeks, depending on the length of the manuscript.